Tuesday, January 14, 2014

Writing

In class we are learning about word choice
here are some examples...    


I looked out the window and into the gloomy early morning sky that seemed to cover up every single bit of dawn that tried to peek through clouds.  
By, Hayden


A dim light shimmered through the dark light room.
By, Marikate


Cold air gushed into boes sole as he walked into the room.
By, Nolan



I muttered quietly to my self. 
By, Jason A



The bus came to a screeching Holt.
By, Catie 





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